Saturday, November 07, 2009

Reworked Lessons 1 and 2

After some very helpful feedback from Laure, I have worked on my first 2 lessons a bit, and I think made them better.  Plus I've added my journaling to my second page.  So here are my new pages:


I've mainly darkened the seat and back of the chair and added some more leaf color to the ground.  I've also tried (and tried is the key word here) to define the leaves on the seat and arm of the chair a bit better.  I must say, Laure is REALLY good at giving feedback.  I'm here to learn, and I know that I have a LOT to learn, so I appreciate very much her comments.  And she does it in a way that makes you feel good about what you've done.  I highly recommend her class!


I also darkened my pumpkin and the shadow under it.  You can see the differences by looking at my earlier chair post and my pumpkin post.

4 comments:

Martha Lever said...

All I can say is FABULOUS!!! I love this watercolor look in journals and well, just look at that word pumpklins!!! I am loving that too!

Krista Meister said...

Way to go, Cheryl!
-Krista
www.kristameister.com

Lay Hoon aka mescrap said...

Marvelous page !! you are so good in using watercolour , i wish I'm half good at as you.

Anne said...

Hi there! Wow! I thought your originals were fabulous, but I can see some of the differences you've made. Stunning results! :-)